Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Part 11 by Tessa

Tessa and her character Laurel.
"Laurel, duck!" screamed Kyrian.
Laurel turned to see an arrow flying toward her. With inhuman swiftness she reached out and caught the arrow. Laurel stared at the arrow quivering in her hand.
"Go Kyrian! We have to get to the elves fast!" Laurel yelled as she leaped up on her horse, sweeping Goricnal up with her.
"Take Goricnal's horse and stay behind me!" Emerion raced past the horses weaving in and out of the trees. The horses mirrored his movement, causing Laurel to almost fall off.
Goricnal was screaming at the top of his lungs. "Pull me up! I'm going to be trampled! Ow, the BEARD! Let me at those fools and they'll be dead in no time!" Laurel was laughing as she pulled him up, but the laughter was cut short when a man in a green tunic stepped out of the forest. Emerion swerved and the horses slid to a stop making Laurel lose her grip and go flying over their heads, dropping Goricnal in the process. She flew straight into the arms of the the stranger in green and they both toppled to the ground.

Laurel opened her eyes and found herself staring into the stranger's blue eyes.
"S-ss-sorry" she stammered as she rolled off of him.
"You better get moving before you get caught. Follow me." he ordered, laughter showing in his eyes. Laurel lowered her gaze and followed after this stranger who had caused her to be filled with something she had never felt before. Kyrian fell into step beside her.
"What was that about?"
"I-I don't know." Laurel said, her puzzled gaze following the stranger's every movement.

Hope you like it and yes they are in love PLUS this is the person or should I say elf, who buried the egg in the beginning of the book. his name is Landlion (Land-Lee-on)
Tessa


3 comments:

Elindira Evenstar said...

Originally, I thought a love story wouldn't fit in, but now I think it will work quite nicely.

***Emily*** said...

Ooh! The plot thinkens....

Tessa said...

thanks...what will happen next?